My True Mate
3
By ifisjf
The story line is entertaining, a little predictable but it kept me interested enough to keep reading. i would have liked more involvement of the wolves after they were introduced, especially the pups since several specific comments were made, including Lucas’ softness toward them. I’d like more backstory about Sarah’s previous interactions with some of the other pack members before being exiled since they seemed to know her so well. I’d also like more scenes showing how Sarah and Lucas have bonded emotionally. The lack of editing is obvious less than halfway through the first chapter. Missing words, misspelled words, typos, grammatical errors, etc. if this type of thing really irritates you, don’t bother reading.